crystallinedrops from above,
with colours of life,
in its semicircled fashion.
You said you love it.
but now, you hate rain,
for it spoils your plans.
Gentle calm breeze,
dropping flowers from above,
with fragrances of floral sweat,
in its innocent art.
You said you love it.
but now, you hate wind,
for its minute part went in your eye.
Exciting chatter,
great companion from nowhere,
with both extreme mood,
in my unique manner.
You said you love me.
but now, you see me as dust,
I agree,
I'm dust but in space.
Ever bright at dark,
for i'm a star!
And I'm not alone!
-Achu.P
9 comments:
wow..thts juss amazing....keep it up
thx.. may i knw who s dis?
is this ur own poetry?...u r really great...u dont know me...i saw it in one of my friends wall.
hmmm easily could be one of your best, so far.. :)
ya i only wrote n published in fb as obscured lines!
hi jattz., its ugly truth ;)
its hard for someone to write such kind of lines unless one experieced it...
:) may be!
sent u a msg in fb...
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