Thursday, June 24, 2010

you said that you loved!!

Shiny bright sky,
crystallinedrops from above,
with colours of life,
in its semicircled fashion.
You said you love it.
but now, you hate rain,
for it spoils  your plans.



Gentle calm breeze,
dropping flowers from above,
with fragrances of floral sweat,
in its innocent art.
You said you love it.
but now, you hate wind,
for its minute part went in your eye.



Exciting chatter,
great companion from nowhere,
with both extreme mood,
in my unique manner.
You said you love me.
but now, you see me as dust,
I agree,
I'm dust but in space.
Ever bright at dark,
for i'm a star!
And I'm not alone!
                                           -Achu.P

9 comments:

Anonymous said...

wow..thts juss amazing....keep it up

achu said...

thx.. may i knw who s dis?

Anonymous said...

is this ur own poetry?...u r really great...u dont know me...i saw it in one of my friends wall.

Jeya Anand said...

hmmm easily could be one of your best, so far.. :)

achu said...

ya i only wrote n published in fb as obscured lines!

achu said...

hi jattz., its ugly truth ;)

Anonymous said...

its hard for someone to write such kind of lines unless one experieced it...

achu said...

:) may be!

Anonymous said...

sent u a msg in fb...